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MarcoCarella

11 Audio Reviews

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you could've used a lowpass on the drum for the second half of the intro, but this is very good nonetheless

could be mastered better, but hey this is very good

God damnit this melody hurts my ears and feelings. Please use a specified scale next time.

thVTA responds:

It's just the instrument. I tested the melody in other instruments and it sounds good.

I'd recommend to use stronger sidechain and sub, but hey this is good

if you used a deeper bass this remix would have been fantastic honestly. And definitely select better kicks.

EMBL3M responds:

yeah, the kicks are not great, and the bass could have been deeper.
thanks for the review!

Overall a decent sound design and sample choice even if the mix and melody are (honestly) bad. Bass bounces from note to note too randomly and chords and snares don't stand out in the drop. Some parts don't need sidechain while others should and the track is constantly clipping, so I recommend you to check the master bar and the tracks separately to avoid to go over 0db. I can expect some huge improvement the next time.

GDZenith responds:

Alright thx a lot :3 I truly appreciate your review, and i understand i can improve a lot ! Thx for that feedback and the score i deserve, this is the kind of reviews i appreciate the most! Next time i'll try to control more the mix stuff, i must still learn a lot!

lacks in several things and background elements. Don't use samples if you don't know how to shape designs.

this is art

Dont really like the distorsion even though i can guess It was intentional for the intro. Really like the first part and transition between the first part of the drop and the second one,which is also a very good part. I would suggest to make the sub bass more powerful for both growls and the drops overall.
Nice job though,i like the drums.

Melody is very repetitive,some chords dont really fit well in certain parts. The kick is too powerful for something like this,plus the transition breakdown -> drop could use some crashes and drum roll,or even white noise.
Overall a decent track though,work more on your EQing is the best advice i can give you.

shrinkmafia1 responds:

Thank you, making music is only a hobby for me and i also didnt put much effort on this one. Please check Ashes and La Minor which are better! <3

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