Dont really like the distorsion even though i can guess It was intentional for the intro. Really like the first part and transition between the first part of the drop and the second one,which is also a very good part. I would suggest to make the sub bass more powerful for both growls and the drops overall.
Nice job though,i like the drums.
Melody is very repetitive,some chords dont really fit well in certain parts. The kick is too powerful for something like this,plus the transition breakdown -> drop could use some crashes and drum roll,or even white noise.
Overall a decent track though,work more on your EQing is the best advice i can give you.
I even doubt you had the permission to upload this song.You know,It is REALLY population,and without any permission you may get in huge trouble.
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